Thing have been really hectic the past couple of days, but rest assured, I'll bring you all up to date soon. Until then, you can enjoy this. It's really fresh...
How long
will it take
for us to
find
each other?
Are you near me
almost under my nose
or are there oceans
vast and deep
literally and figuratively
between us?
Have we met?
Have we seen
each other
not knowing
but deriving pleasure
from the thrill
of that possibility?
How will we know?
By something
you ( I )
say?
A gesture, a comment
I ( you )
make?
Can you imagine how
it will be?
How we will
help
one another
grow?
How I will be
your strength
Faithful
Always
constant and consistent
And you
will complete me
cloaking my prose
with your melody
Poetry e-motion...
Do you yearn
as I yearn
are you tired of waiting
as I am?
I thought so...
See you soon...
Tuesday, July 10, 2007
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10 comments:
dont know if "see you soon" was part of the poem..... but it should be! what a great ending to a great poem!! powerful stuff man!
Moe - It was intended to be part of the poem.
Glad you liked it...
nice one...
my thoughts exactly.
so romantic..
I hope it is soon.
if she reads your writing it will be soon...
I think you summed up the feelings of many of us...
i sense a burnt out feeling
hope im wrong!
But very nice!
Dreamer - Glad (sort of) that you can relate...
Dave - That's me. A romantic ball of mush...
Come Running - Amen to that!
Shoshana - I was hoping to...
Reb Y. - Not burnt at all. Maybe a little well done, but still swinging...
btw, this is my favorite line of the poem -
cloaking my prose
with your melody
wow...
Glad you liked it, Dreamer...
Not to sound all into myself, but that's my favorite part, too, along with "Poetry e-motion", which was a little play on poetry in motion...
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